As teamprivite said, you should finish your flash before submitting it. With that said, here's some things to improve on:
-Zoom the flash in. At first, I couldn't even see Mario or the fireball because it was so tiny.
-Make the framerate smoother. Unfortunately, I'm no expert at flash so I can't tell you how to go about doing that. But, you have to fix it, man. It looks incredibly cheap.
-Add some sounds. Aside from the music, there was no sound at all. And the music just loops which is quite annoying.
Perhaps you're already working on these issues and this flash is just a rough draft of sorts. But as it stands, I'm gonna have to give this flash a 0. That does not mean that you should give up the project altogether. It just means that you have to do some hard work to make something good of it. Best of luck.
The Drkside Of The Moon
I'm going to be frank here. This flash brought me to tears. Never before have I seen such display of love towards one fellow man. You see, I have lived a bitter life filled with strife and hatred. Every day was like the last and I had no hope whatsoever in my fellow man. But then I saw this flash and was reminded that love is indeed not dead. You have my eternal gratitude.
On that note, drkside needs to stop playa hatin' yah nah mean!
yea n***a he does!!!!!!
No 5 for you, good sir!
Come on, chief. This is just a slide show of some pictures set to some music, can't really give a 5 to that. It was sort of funny, so I'll give you a point or two.
You have sack boys in my ragdolls....
......you've have ragdolls in my sack boys! These are two great tastes that go well together!
I loved pretty everything about this game. I loved the look, I loved the music, I loved the diversity of the puzzles, I loved it all! Great game, 5/5 10/10!
Just another shoot-the-targets game.
I could go on and on about how many other games are like this one but that would take up too much space. So here it goes, this game is bland, very, very bland. There isn't a single unique feature in this flash. It is as bare bones as a flash game can possibly get. And now here's some things I liked about it:
-You actually animated the targets when you shoot them. I'm not being a smartass since a good deal of these games just have them disappear. So, kudos.
And now for the bad:
-As mentioned above, this game is very bland and the fact that it doesn't have any music makes it even more bland. If you plan to make any more flash games in the future, add music! Hardly anyone wants to play a game that doesn't have any music.
-Change the background, red and gray is grating on the eyes. Change it into something else.
-Add some spice for Christ's sake. Game modes, a flashy menu, funny noises, explosions, anything to make this stand out from the HUNDREDS of shoot the target games!
The shooting itself isn't bad and if you were to make another game of this type, I would suggest building upon it with the suggestions mentioned above. Best of luck.
It's alright but it's not front page material IMO
For starters, this game has a terrible difficulty curve. Up until the rapper guy, the game is really easy. After that, there is a HUGE spike in difficulty. Another thing is that the art is below average. Granted, I've seen plenty worse but it looks like something made a couple of years ago.
And now for the pros and the constructive criticism. I liked the variety of characters and I'll admit that I was amused by Big Dan's constant reappearances. If you were to make another Quickdraw, I'd say to improve the art and add some more special effects.
This is an alright game and despite it's appearance, it looks like you put a lot of effort into it. But I'm confused as why this is on the front page. Oh well. Good job!
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